Post 7

Part One:

This last week in the writing center I did something a little different, a young lady came into the center wanting help with citation. The kid Joesph who I was working with did not know MLA format, and I am very familiar with MLA. Not only did I take charge and help the young lady out but I was also helping Joesph out and he was able to learn from me. What I did was help her with incite and how to give credit for a author like (Daskam, 9) then also told her easybib.com was a very helpful source for doing a work cited page.

Part Two:

With the PSA we do not know what second chance wants to get across to listeners. So we will wait to see if they have a new event coming up and go form there to help them out with a new PSA. Also with the cat VS. dog penny war, it would be really good if they did that and made a rule that for every silver coin points are taken off.

Part Three:

So what I did was I explained myself more with the "thing" and I changed up the verb to be more stronger. I am still struggling with verbs but this is a good start I feel for myself.

Also one thing that I really need to work on in general is not waiting till the last few days to write my paper, in college it’s a little hard with all the other work but since writing is difficult I want to work on not waiting till the last minute to write a paper. What I want to work on this is semester is my weak points and get better at them.

With writing, one thing that I really need to improve on in general is not waiting till the last few days to write my paper, in college it’s a little more difficult with all the other work but since writing is a struggle with me I want to work on not waiting till the last minute to write a paper. What I want to work on this is semester is my weak points and get better at them.