Friday, January 25, 2013

Post 3

During my time at the writing center I worked with one student who brought in a scholarship application to be looked at. I was a little nerves because like I have said writing is not my strong point, but while I was working with him I was shock at myself at how much of a help I was. Just simply pointing out things like describe a little more on what you  did at this certain event,  telling him that he should reword some sentence because reading it I do not understand what you are trying to say here. I also was able to help him out because he kept saying he does not feel like he has enough information for each question, even though there was a word limit. I said that what you have done is great because by reading what you have said you are not trying to fill the word limit with fluff words you are telling me what you did and that is really great because as the person reading this you don't want to feel broad or that you are BSing questions. In the end I ended up staying a hour longer then needed just helping this one student out.

I really do not know what to say about chapter 3. I mean I understand what the modifiers do for sentence and how they make a sentece understandable, but it just seem like information I already knew expect I did not know it was called complements, modifiers or style.

2 comments:

  1. I felt the same way when I read chapter three. I have been using transitive and intransitive verbs, as well as compliments and modifiers in all of my pieces of writing. I just had no clue that they had specific names for each situation. I don't see anything for the revision portion of the post (part 3), so I guess I don't have to comment on that part of the response!

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  2. Hi Jordan,

    Good reflection on your WC Internship. For Ch. 3 (or any chapter where you're not sure how to respond), think about how you might use the information for revision. Of course you have been using transitive verbs, complements, and modifiers--we all do. For your revision, you can ask yourself questions like these: are my verbs the best? Are my modifiers all necessary? If you decide that all your verbs, e.g., are great, then explain why.

    Part 3 is an opportunity for you to take a part of your writing and revise according to the ideas in the chapter--or show how you're really strong in that particular area.

    Beth

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